Love gone wrong in 33 words or less

From the folks at Trifecta, a good test of your talents this week–for all you writers and non-writers alike.

“This week we’re asking for exactly 33 of your own words about love gone wrong.  But we’re asking that you not use any of the following words: love, sad, tears, wept, heart, pain.”

Here’s my stab at it. Come on people, get brave. Give it a try.Pupil_B

His eyes glittered but he was no longer behind them. The he who shared my life. And I would not stay with what had taken his place. All that glitters is not gold.

9 Comments Add yours

  1. Oooo. That’s a cool one! Some glitter you just have to run from. Thanks for linking up!

  2. Indeed .. the lure of glitter…

  3. Draug419 says:

    Awesome work.

    1. candidkay says:

      Thank you for reading and the kind words.

  4. jannatwrites says:

    Intriguing… there’s so much more story behind this one 🙂

  5. KymmInBarcelona says:

    I do hope she is running, not walking, away!

  6. lmarieallen says:

    You’re on. It’s go time.

    1. candidkay says:

      Bring it, sister:)

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